While presenting our pitch for the opening sequence
of the movie Ever Line, our peers and teacher were
asked to give us feedback with what was good about
our ideas and what needs more work.
What went well
- After looking at the written feedback, we noticed that all of our classmates tended to like the title of our movie (Ever Line), they said that it was solid and a smart play on words.
- According to our peers our institution ideas were well thought out and detailed
What would have made the pitch better
- More distributed speech
- More organisation(should have put everything on one presentation, videos, and sub prezi's)
How did we improve overall due to the feedback
- Instead of including the knife, we decided to wash it instead and not to make it as obvious
- We made the stalker call her to add suspense
Rough pitch mark:
7.9
This is our recorded feedback:
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